And the rest of the first story still isn't up. Bad bad me.
I'll get some more chapters up, I promise. There were two reasons I stopped uploading pieces:
1) I use formatting to make emphasis, and most of that gets lost on DeviantArt. Example: I use a different font face (courier new) to represent text read from a digital device. That's lost because DA doesn't support more than extremely basic formatting text in artwork upload.
2) I changed some of the universe around a bit. Variations on the tech, the structure of the Eximius Vir military departments, different characters within the world, and several larger plot lines that are hinted at in the first story.
I'm also practicing my photo-manipulation, in the hopes of eventually making visual references for the various characters. So far I've only mentioned 4, maybe 5 in the uploaded story parts. I have over 25 named and distinct characters designed and active within the universe at this point, and am adding more as inspiration hits.
So, right. Chapter uploads.
:edit: 3 more chapters are uploaded. Including the big initiation! :/edit:


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